PT14 副詞の挿入場所 [then]

以上のような構成の熱アシスト磁気ヘッド１を用いて磁気記録媒体１４に磁気記録を行う際には、スライダ５の裏面５ａに連結されたＬＤ２８の一対の電極２５ａ，２５ｂに電力が供給され、活性層２７がレーザ光１９を発生させてこの活性層２７に対向するコア３に入射させる。

(NG) When magnetic recording is performed to the magnetic recording medium 14 utilizing the thermally-assisted magnetic head 1 having the above-described configuration, power is supplied to the pair of the electrodes 25a and 25b of the LD 28, which are linked with the back surface 5a of the slider 5, and then the active layer 27 generates the laser light 19 and the laser light 19 enters into the core 3 facing the active layer 27.

(OK) When magnetic recording is performed to the magnetic recording medium 14 utilizing the thermally-assisted magnetic head 1 having the above-described configuration, power is supplied to the pair of the electrodes 25a and 25b of the LD 28, which are linked with the back surface 5a of the slider 5, the active layer 27 then generates the laser light 19 and the laser light 19 enters into the core 3 facing the active layer 27.

そして、図５Ｂに示すように、第２の部分１６ｂの材料を積層形成する。それから、図５Ｃに示すように、レジスト３０ａとその上に積層された材料とを除去する。

(NG) Then, as illustrated in Fig. 5B, a material of the second part 16b is formed in a lamination manner. Then, as illustrated in Fig. 5C, the resist 30a and the material laminated thereon are is removed.

(OK) As illustrated in Fig. 5B, a material of the second part 16b is then formed in a lamination manner. As illustrated in Fig. 5C, the resist 30a and the material laminated thereon are then is removed.